Tori Howard Peer Review
Writers
- state your topic here:
- Bold your thesis statement.
- Underline the passages you feel confident about.
- Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here: Could there possibly be a better way to explain that?
Reviewers
Reviewer one name: Greta
- What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome? It's a little confusing at first, but if you go back and re-read it, it's totally fine! No worries, unless you want to make it more clear.
- What are the most memorable pieces of writing? The picture idea, and how they strip layers to find things.
- Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging? It grabs your attention, but is like "Oh, okay, maybe I'm crazy! I'll just keep reading."
- What questions are you left with after reading this essay? How the photo thing works. If you walk into a room with different lighting who's to say the entity follows or doesn't?
- What does the writer still need to work on? Watch spelling, punctuation, and run on sentences. Otherwise, no problems!
- What is the essay's greatest strength? It all goes together very smoothly. Topic to topic, and review.
Reviewer two name:
- What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
- What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
- Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?
- What questions are you left with after reading this essay?
- What does the writer still need to work on?
- What is the essay's greatest strength?