Tori Howard Peer Review

Writers

  1. state your topic here:
  2. Bold your thesis statement.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here: Could there possibly be a better way to explain that?

Reviewers

Reviewer one name: Greta

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome? It's a little confusing at first, but if you go back and re-read it, it's totally fine! No worries, unless you want to make it more clear.
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing? The picture idea, and how they strip layers to find things.
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging? It grabs your attention, but is like "Oh, okay, maybe I'm crazy! I'll just keep reading."
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay? How the photo thing works. If you walk into a room with different lighting who's to say the entity follows or doesn't?
  • What does the writer still need to work on? Watch spelling, punctuation, and run on sentences. Otherwise, no problems!
  • What is the essay's greatest strength? It all goes together very smoothly. Topic to topic, and review.

Reviewer two name:

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay?
  • What does the writer still need to work on?
  • What is the essay's greatest strength?
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