Izaiah Asher Peer Review

For the text in purple, I rushed it and I'm not sure if it reads well.

Reviewers

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome? It was pretty good for the most of it, there was no spelling errors.-Nahayla

It was really interesting and enjoyable to read. I think it would be cool to read and learn more about this topic. -Tori

  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing? That they don't only use swords, that they also used guns, bows, and spears.-Nahayla

How loyal they are and how they show that loyalty. -Tori

  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging? You really didn't talk about how they where in the Japanese culture and I didn't know that.-Nahayla

Talk more about the history on where they are from. -Tori

  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay? Not much pretty good.-Nahayla

How did they become a samurai, were they just born into that area? -Tori

  • What does the writer still need to work on? When he first talked about Shoguns in the third paragraph, he should have described what they were instead of putting it on in the fourth. I was wondering what they where at first.-Nahayla

I don't think there are many things that he needs to work on. I think that he did a really good job. -Tori

  • What is the essay's greatest strength? How he talked about how loyal they are and how they commit suicide when they are about to lose to a match.-Nahayla

The major loyalty. -Tori

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