Informative Essay Peer Review Veronica


  1. state your topic here: The Importance of Interior Design
  2. Bold your thesis statement.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here: Spelling


  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome? I did not find any spelling errors in the essay
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing? the colors and the balance of the furniture
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging? yes because of the informative bit about the interior design
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay? what about exterior design
  • What does the writer still need to work on? capitalizing the I's
  • What is the essay's greatest strength? the essay is very compelling

Tristan Bolstad

There were a few placees where the "I" wasn't capitalized when it should've been (mostly just in the intro.). The tips you added in were memorable. The introduction was good. A few grammatical errors. It was very fun to read. ~Sydney

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