Informative Essay Peer Review Tristan

Reviewers

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome? How they measure the earthquakes intensity.
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing? Everything in the 2nd paragraph.
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging? Yes and No. It could be more engaging by saying a little bit more about whats going to be talked about. But other than that its good.
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay? What got you interested in the study of earthquakes?
  • What does the writer still need to work on? Capitalization.
  • What is the essay's greatest strength? Keeping up with the information.

Tori Howard

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