Informative Essay Peer Review Sydney B


  1. state your topic here: Anime
  2. Bold your thesis statement.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here: Is my wording ok, or is it too confusing? Is my introduction good enough?

Reviewers Veronica

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
  • Your intro was great. I understood it well enough.
  • The intro didn't catch my attention, didn't have me on my toes
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
  • So I didn't know what Comiket was so that.
  • Your facts, and word choices (very Impressive)
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?'
  • I thought it was.
  • It didn't have me on my toes, tips= use questions, bold some words, use punctuation
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay?

What do some of these word mean?

  • nothing it was well informative
  • What does the writer still need to work on?
  • Me don't know.
  • connecting more with the reader
  • What is the essay's greatest strength?
  • information, professional word play
  • It's really really informative about anime.
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