Informative Essay Peer Review Sydney B
Writers
- state your topic here: Anime
- Bold your thesis statement.
- Underline the passages you feel confident about.
- Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here: Is my wording ok, or is it too confusing? Is my introduction good enough?
Reviewers Veronica
- What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
- Your intro was great. I understood it well enough.
- The intro didn't catch my attention, didn't have me on my toes
- What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
- So I didn't know what Comiket was so that.
- Your facts, and word choices (very Impressive)
- Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?'
- I thought it was.
- It didn't have me on my toes, tips= use questions, bold some words, use punctuation
- What questions are you left with after reading this essay?
What do some of these word mean?
- nothing it was well informative
- What does the writer still need to work on?
- Me don't know.
- connecting more with the reader
- What is the essay's greatest strength?
- information, professional word play
- It's really really informative about anime.