Informative Essay Peer Review Mariah


  1. state your topic here: History of Women's Basketball
  2. Women have been playing basketball as long as the Men have but the Women don't get as much attention as the Men, and the Women don't get paid as much as the Men do.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here:


  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
  • Nothing I thought it was a well written essay
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
  • That women's basketball has been around about as long as the men's.
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?
  • Its effective and I'm not sure.
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay?
  • None
  • What does the writer still need to work on?
  • I'm not sure
  • What is the essay's greatest strength?
  • The facts and what it says about women's basketball.

Slayde J

Unless otherwise stated, the content of this page is licensed under Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike 3.0 License