Informative Essay Peer Review Fairbanks


  1. state your topic here: History of the Internet
  2. Bold your thesis statement.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here:

Needs to be reworded like it doesn't sound "smooth". Punctuation?


  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?
  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay?
  • What does the writer still need to work on?
  • What is the essay's greatest strength?

In the concluding statement of how many people use the internet, the number might need to be cited. It was very interesting to read about why the internet was originally created. The introduction was very good. What caused them to let the public know about the ARPAnet? Maybe smoother sentences. Its greatest strength was probably the interesting information you presented. ~Sydney
I don't have any advice I thought it was a well written essay and the introduction was good, I don't have any questions. Slayde J

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