Essay Peer Review

Writers

  1. state your topic here:The History of American Football
  2. Bold your thesis statement.
  3. Underline the passages you feel confident about.
  4. Change the color of sections of the text you find troublesome. Ask for specific advice here:

Reviewers

  • What advice do you have for the writer concerning the passages she or he find troublesome?
  • What are the most memorable pieces of writing?
  • Is the introduction effective? How could it be more engaging?

I think it is effect because the sport Football has been around for a long time.

  • What questions are you left with after reading this essay?

How did the rules change over the years?

  • What does the writer still need to work on?

Typing more information of the topic

  • What is the essay's greatest strength?

When football first started

Mariah Ortiz

The most "memorable" thing to me was that Football was call harpastum. That was pretty interesting. Combine some sentences in the intro. It seems like they all begin with I chose. What were some of the rules in the colonies. Give some details on the rules and stuff like that. It gives a lot of interesting info. -AndrewF

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